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And I hold my breath and watch this all fade
All my compassion drowned beneath the corpses of loved ones
Like the steps ascending from my heart
Beneath the autumn leaves upon the forest floor

The pieces fall like a broken jigsaw
Discarded away with every love letter,
Every thing that's ever been said,
Every feeling I've ever had

No more passion, no more heartache
No more happiness, no more love
No more anything, only memories of great beauty,
Great torment, a great emotion that left all the feelings in my heart

One day I may feel love again,
But my passion is lost
The night sky has taken all my feelings
And all is numb...
©2004-2009 ~fireflystarrs
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:icononarada:
I like this a lot. I wish I could write like that. :D well done :clap:

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'I lie for only you and I lie well Halleluh' - Brand New
:iconpoetry-in-despair:
very lovely. you're a good writer--it's quite a romantic poem even though its rather sad...
good imagery & emotion........ :heart:

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